RETIRED at level 7*

Summary Edit

Alnar Player Luinnar
Human Sorcerer (Good) Level 5 (XP 10341)
Initiative +2
Passive Insight 12 Passive Perception 14; Senses normal
HP 46 Bloodied 23 Surge Value 11 (+2 when Draco is active); Surges Per-Day 8
AC 15 Fortitude 16 Reflex 14 Will 19
Speed 6 Size Medium
Str 16 (+3) Dex 10 (+0) Wis 10 (+0)
Con 14 (+2) Int 12 (+1) Cha 19 (+4)
Racial Abilities bonus at-will power, bonus feat, bonus skill, defense bonuses
Class Features Spell Source (Dragon Magic), Draconic Power, Draconic Resilience, Dragon Soul (fire), Scales of the Dragon
Battack Basic Attack Staff of Ruin +9 vs AC 1d8+5
Branged Ranged Basic Attack None
Feats Arcane Familiar (Dragonling), Ritual Caster, Bardic Dilettante, Skill Power, Staff Expertise (HOTFK)
Skills Acrobatics +2, Arcana +8, Athletics +10, Bluff +11, Diplomacy + 11, Dungeoneering +2, Endurance +9, Heal +2, History + 3, Insight + 2, Intimidate +11,Nature +2, Perception +4, Religion +3, Stealth +2, Streetwise +6, Thievery +2.
Languages Allarian, Hzakan, Draconic (Dragonling)
Rituals Comprehend Language (Arcana), Unseen Servant (Arcana), Traveler's Chant, Tenser's Floating Disc,Comrade's Succor, Object Reading
Burning Spray (At Will Standard Close blast 3 ✦ Arcane, Fire, Implement)
Target: Each creature in blast
Attack: +8 vs. Reflex
Hit: 1d8+9 fire damage
Special: The next enemy that hits you with a melee attack before the end of your next turn takes fire damage =3.
Chaos Bolt (At Will Standard Ranged 10 ✦ Acid, Arcane, Psychic)
Target: One Creature
Attack: +8 vs. will
Hit: 1d8+9 psychic damage
Blazing Starfall (At Will Standard Area burst 1 within 10 squares. ✦ Arcane, Fire, Implement, Radiant, Zone)
Target: Each creature in burst
Attack: +8 vs. Reflex
Hit: 1d4+9 radiant damage
Thunder Slam (Encounter Standard Ranged 10 ✦ Arcane, Implement, Thunder)
Target: One creature
Attack: +8 vs. Fortitude
Hit: 2d10+9 thunder damage, and is pushed 3 squares.
Flame Spiral (Encounter Standard Close Burst 2 ✦ Arcane, Fire, Implement)
Target: One, two or three creatures in burst.
Attack: +8 vs. Ref
Hit: 1d10+9 fire damage.
Effect: Until the start of your next turn, any enemy that enters or starts its turn adjacent to you takes 1d6+4 fire damage.
Spatial Trip (Encounter Move ✦ Arcane, Teleportation, Personal)
Effect: You teleport 3 squares.
Ice Javelins (Daily Standard Ranged 10 ✦ Arcane, Cold, Implement)
Target: One, Two or Three Creatures
Attack: +8 vs. Reflex
Hit: 1d10+9 and ongoing cold damage 5 (save ends).
Miss: Half damage
Majestic Word (Daily Minor Close Burst 5 ✦ Arcane, Healing)
Target: You or ally in burst
Effect: Target can spend a healing surge and regain 4 additional hp. You also slide the target 1 square.
Inspiring Fortitude (AKA Invigorating Presence) (Daily Standard Close Burst 5 )
Requirement: Must be trained in Endurance. and have your second wind available.
Target: Each ally in burst
Effect: Spend your second wind. Each ally gains 12 THP.
Thunder Leap (Daily Standard Close Burst 1 ✦ Arcane, Implement, Thunder)
Target: each creature in burst
Attack: +8 vs. fort
Hit: 2d6+9 thunder damage.
Effect: You jump 10 squares, this does not provoke OA and make a secondary attack.

Fluff Edit

Background Edit

Alnar past is fraught with tragedy. As a baby his town was attacked by a band of goblins with a symbol of a blue hand across their chests. He was saved by a old man named Wales who took the him from his dieing mother and raised him as his own.

"I stumbled across your town of birth when on my travels. What was the name I cannot say, if it is on a map I never have seen it. When I got there it was ablaze with fire. In my search for survivors I found a young women with blue eyes and red hair. With her dieing breath she told me that the town was attacked by a band of goblins sporting a mark of a blue hand across their chests. She made me promise that I would save you from the fate that befell her. This locket of hers is the only thing of that town I could save, besides you. What became of your father I do not know."

Alnar was raised by the mysterious old man. When asked about his past Wales would always say "Some things I don't care to recall, perhaps when you are older I will tell you the whole tale." He discovered his powers in his early teens. With the help of his mentor, who know about things arcane, he begin to train in the powers of dragon magic. As the boy grew into a man he ventured with his mentor going about helping the people the little they could.

One day they heard a cry for help from travelers that were under attack. Before they could reach them they were ambushed by unknown attackers and Alnar was hit with a sling bullet, knocking him unconscious. When he came to he searched nearby and found a body of a dead women with brown hair and his dieing mentor. With his last breath he made Alnar promise to search out for the rest of the family, a father and two young children who were captured by humanoid monsters. Alnar searched but could not find any sign of what happened to the family. Later he went back to the spot of the battle to properly bury his mentor and the women and found the bodies gone.

Now he adventures, with slim hope of finally finding the family and for clues of who he really is.

Appearance and personality Edit

Age: 28
Gender: Male
Height: 6"
Weight: 190 lb.
Alignment: Good
Personality: To most Alnar is brash and has a devil-may-care attitude. Inside however he is actually a very insecure person, thanks to his tragic past. He does not ever want to suffer a loss of a loved one again, but more importantly he wants to make sure others don't share his fate. Though difficult to befriend he can be fiercely loyal when gained his trust. He is clever, though sometimes sticks his foot in his mouth. He likes animals, though does not have one traveling with him at the moment.

Physical Description: Alnar is a broad shouldered handsome young man wearing bright blue robes, sporting shoulder length red hair and has piercing orange eyes. Thanks to a life living outdoor he has a fairly muscular physique.

Draco: Draco is Alnar's Dragonling familiar and was once his master's. He appears to be a small gold dragon. He is quite affectionate toAlnar, and seems to be the only thing Alnar truly trusts.

Region Edit


Hooks Edit

  • Hook 1: What happened to his mentor and the women's body?
  • Hook 2: What happened to the family who was kidnapped?
  • Hook 3: Who or what attacked them and killed his mentor?
  • Hook 4: Goblins who burned down Alnar home town. (who are they, why did they do it?)
  • Hook 5: Family heritage (who is he related to, any living relatives, last name etc.)
  • Hook 6: Wear about of his father (died in fire? still alive?)
  • Hook 7: Who was his mentor?

Kicker Edit

  • Mentor killed by an unknown humanoids, searching for the captive family.

Wishlist Edit

!= Want Priority

  • Staff of Ruin +2 (AV) !!!!!!
  • 4. Hedgewizard's Gloves (AV) !!!!
  • 5. Bloodthread Armor +1 (PHB) !!!!!

Show Math Edit

Ability Scores Edit

Str 7 15 0 1 16 3
Con 5 14 0 0 14 2
Dex 0 10 0 0 10 0
Int 2 12 0 0 12 1
Wis 2 10 0 0 10 0
Cha 9 16 2 1 19 4
Totals 25   10

Attacks Edit

Basic Attacks
Attack TypeAttribAttrib TypeClassClass FeatureFeatFeat NameEquipEquip NameMiscMisc NameLevelTotalvs?
Basic Melee


str 1Staff Expertise3Staff of Ruin +129AC
Basic Ranged



Defenses Edit

DefenseAttribAttrib TypeClassRacialFeatFeat NameEquipEquip NameMiscMisc NameLevelTotal
Armor Class +0/+1 dex/int 2 Draconic Resilience 2 15
Fortitude+3/+2str/con12 16
Reflex+0/+1dex/int1 2 14
Will+0/+4wis/cha21 2 19

Saving Throw Bonuses none

Senses and Reactions Edit

Senses and Reactions
Sense/ReactionAttrib modClassClass FeatureRacialFeatFeat NameEquipEquip NameLevelOther/TrainedTotal
Initiative 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 0 2
Passive Insight 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 0 12
Passive Perception 0 0 0 0 2 Character Background (forest) 0 0 2 0 14

Health Edit

--Base ClassConPer LevelRacialFeatFeat NameEquipEquip NameOtherSurge Value BonusTotalBloodiedSurge
Hit Points 12 14 5 0 0 0 0 46 23 11

Surges per Day 8 (Class 6 + Con 2)

Speed and Movement Edit

Speed: 6 (Race 6 - Equipment 0)

Racial Features Edit


  • Bonus Feat
  • Bonus Trained Skill
  • Bonus At-Will Power
  • +1 Fort, Refl, Will
  • +2 to one Attribute
  • Size: Medium
  • Speed: 6
  • Vision: Normal
  • Languages: Common + any 1

Class Features Edit


  • +2 Will
  • Draconic Power: You gain a strength bonus (+3) to damage rolls for aracane powers.
  • Draconic Resilience: When not wearing heavy armour, you can use you Str mod instead of your Int/Dex mod to determine your AC.
  • Dragon Soul: Resist Fire 5. Arcane attacks ignore 5 fire resistince.
  • Scales of the Dragon: The first time you are bloodied during an encounter, you gian a +2 bonus to Ac until the end of the encounter.
  • Healing surges get +2 hp (Dragonling)

Feats Edit

  • Arcane Familiar (Dragonling)
  • Ritual Caster [Human Bonus]
  • Bardic Dilettante (Diplomacy)
  • Skill power
  • Staff Expertise

Skills and Languages Edit

Languages Allarian, Hzakan, Draconic (Dragonling)
Character Background Alnar grew up in forested areas away from population centers, learning to survive there and becoming more in tune with his surroundings.(+2 Perception)

SkillTrainedAttribAttrib TypeRacialFeatFeat NameEquipEquip NameLevelTotal
Arcana 5 1 int 2 8
Perception0wis2Character Background (forest).24

Powers Edit

Powers KnownEdit

  • At-Will
    • Burning Spray
    • Chaos Bolt
    • Blazing Starfall [Human Bonus]
  • Encounter
    • Thunder Slam
    • Spatial Trip
    • Flame Spiral
  • Daily
    • Inspiring Fortitude (AKA Invigorating Presence)
    • Ice Javelins
    • Thunder Leap
    • Majestic Word

Powers to Hit Edit

Power To-Hit
Attack TypeAttribAttrib TypeClassClass FeatureFeatFeat NameEquipEquip NameMiscMisc NameLevelTotalvs?
Chaos Bolt +4 Cha +1 Staff Expertise +1 Staff of Ruin +1 0 0 2 8 Will
Burning Spray +4 Cha +1 Staff Expertise +1 Staff of Ruin +1 0 0 2 8 Reflex
Blazing Starfall +4 Cha +1 Staff Expertise +1 Staff of Ruin +1 0 0 2 8 Reflex
Thunder Slam +4 Cha +1 Staff Expertise +1 Staff of Ruin +1 0 0 2 8 Fort
Ice Javelins +4 Cha +1 Staff Expertise +1 Staff of Ruin +1 0 0 2 8 Reflex
Thunder Leap +4 Cha +1 Staff Expertise +1 Staff of Ruin +1 0 0 2 8 Fort

Equipment Edit

Equipment Name Price Weight
Cloth Armor (robes) 0gp (starting equipment) 4lbs
Quarterstaff 5gp 4lbs
Dagger 1gp 1lb
Standard Adventurer's Kit 15gp 33lbs
Ritual Components (Arcana) 50gp -
Ritual Book. 50gp 3lb
Silver Locket (keepsake from his mother).
Staff of Ruin +1 0gp 3lbs

Traveler's Chant Focus 5gp 0lbs

Residuum 60gp

Potion of healing 50gp

Potion of Regeneration 160gp

Art worth 256 gold.

Gold remaining 2473 + picture
Weight 48 lbs

Tracking Edit

Treasure Edit

+40 GP Arcana Ritual Componets (from wild plants)

Unseen Servant (next rest, from plant).

+220 (encounter gp)

60 gp residumm

+Staff of Ruin +1, 620gp link

+Potion of healing -50gp, Potion of Regeneration- 160 gp, Travaler's Chant focus -5 gp, Travler's Chant -75gp, Tenser's Floating Disc -50gp, + Comrad's Succor -150gp, +Object Reading -250gp (bought in town)

+254 gp (1 DM credit at level 3) + 2100 gp (6 DM credits at level 4).

XP Edit

+1,056 XP

+2,569 link

+250 xp (1 DM credit at level 3)

+1752 (6 DM credits at level 4) link

+2212 xp link

+2502 (6 credits at level 6) link

Changes Edit

Judge Comments Edit

Level 1 Edit

Approval 1 Edit

Approval from --ScorpiusRisk

Approval 2 Edit

Approved by renau1g

Overhaul Edit

Approval 1 Edit

Approval from --ScorpiusRisk

Level 2 Edit

Approval 1Edit

Comments from Rapida:

  • Invigorating Presence should be Inspiring Fortitude I think
  • Under blazing starfall I'd change the range to "Area burst 1 within 10 squares"
  • Under what you have labeled as Invigorating Presence you should specify the Requirement: Your second wind must be available for you to use and the Prerequisite: You must be trained in Endurance

Those are pretty minor issues so I'll go ahead and put my approval for Luinnar.

Approval 1Edit

Comments from renau1g:

Level 5: Edit

Approval 1 Edit

Approved for level 5 by FourMonos

Approval 2 Edit

Approved by TwoHeadsBarking.

Status Edit

Status: Approved for level 5 by FourMonos and TwoHeadsBarking.

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